This I wonder
1. Wrong sentence- I would always where a big sweater or hide my belly any way I could.(passive, grammar)
2. Revised sentence- I wore a big sweater to hide my belly(active)
1. Wrong sentence- The alarm is for when someone may try to kidnap a baby.(passive)
2. Revised sentence- when a baby is taking from the hospital the alarm will activate. (active)
1. Wrong sentence- I remember walking into prom and everybody just looked at my pregnant belly.(passive)
2. Revised sentence- walking into prom while everyone just stared at my belly. (active)
This I Argue
1. Wrong sentence- Once I paid my bills and other finances I barely had enough money to buy him food for the last week and half. (passive)
2. Revised sentence- After the bills where paid and other finances I had no money left to buy him food for the next week.(active)
1. Wrong sentence- Another idea is that the eligible requirements for SNAP benefits need to be lowered. (passive)
2. Revised sentence- SNAP benefits eligibility and requirements should be lowered. (active)
1. Wrong sentence- Lowering the cost of fruits and vegetables so parents can buy it instead of buying junk food is another way to stop food desserts.(passive , run-on)
Revised sentence- Lowering fresh produce cost so parents can afford it. (active
1. Wrong sentence- I would always where a big sweater or hide my belly any way I could.(passive, grammar)
2. Revised sentence- I wore a big sweater to hide my belly(active)
1. Wrong sentence- The alarm is for when someone may try to kidnap a baby.(passive)
2. Revised sentence- when a baby is taking from the hospital the alarm will activate. (active)
1. Wrong sentence- I remember walking into prom and everybody just looked at my pregnant belly.(passive)
2. Revised sentence- walking into prom while everyone just stared at my belly. (active)
This I Argue
1. Wrong sentence- Once I paid my bills and other finances I barely had enough money to buy him food for the last week and half. (passive)
2. Revised sentence- After the bills where paid and other finances I had no money left to buy him food for the next week.(active)
1. Wrong sentence- Another idea is that the eligible requirements for SNAP benefits need to be lowered. (passive)
2. Revised sentence- SNAP benefits eligibility and requirements should be lowered. (active)
1. Wrong sentence- Lowering the cost of fruits and vegetables so parents can buy it instead of buying junk food is another way to stop food desserts.(passive , run-on)
Revised sentence- Lowering fresh produce cost so parents can afford it. (active